tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411231637771693377.post940871894599742185..comments2024-03-26T22:57:41.830-04:00Comments on Writers On The Move: Revision, Part 1: An Early Fiction Checklist Karen Cioffihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15492421057039326702noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411231637771693377.post-61971524090770862132016-01-29T12:54:23.776-05:002016-01-29T12:54:23.776-05:00I'm glad it's helpful. Best of luck with y...I'm glad it's helpful. Best of luck with your writing. Thanks for commenting.Linda Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14196966007010708558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411231637771693377.post-14594183409417811532016-01-29T11:53:14.903-05:002016-01-29T11:53:14.903-05:00This is such a helpful post! I particularly loved ...This is such a helpful post! I particularly loved the examples you gave from your work-in-progress. Thanks for writing!Dallas Woodburnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06156437061012375523noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411231637771693377.post-2496515165108070402016-01-27T21:04:58.848-05:002016-01-27T21:04:58.848-05:00Hello, Margaret, I'm so glad these revision su...Hello, Margaret, I'm so glad these revision suggestions have helped. Best of luck revising your stories. Thank you for your thoughtful comment.Linda Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14196966007010708558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411231637771693377.post-81001561317419400082016-01-27T15:50:36.187-05:002016-01-27T15:50:36.187-05:00I read Ingrid Sundberg's article and finished ...I read Ingrid Sundberg's article and finished your's. What great information. I like how your revisions change with your understandng and applying. I'm looking forward to introducing them in revisions of my short stories.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07002642965251274585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411231637771693377.post-4729786537923043352014-09-05T11:18:22.025-04:002014-09-05T11:18:22.025-04:00Ha Annie, I hope it helps!Ha Annie, I hope it helps!Linda Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14196966007010708558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411231637771693377.post-65668379716459043352014-09-05T10:58:28.445-04:002014-09-05T10:58:28.445-04:00Whoops--off to revise again. Great advice.. Whoops--off to revise again. Great advice.. Anne Duguid Knolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10332742931248440319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411231637771693377.post-83200605712574789812014-08-30T17:52:48.234-04:002014-08-30T17:52:48.234-04:00Ha Tracy, it's a great bag, isn't it?! The...Ha Tracy, it's a great bag, isn't it?! The only problem with it is it doesn't carry the entire office! Thanks, Mary Jo. I hope the idea is helpful.Linda Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14196966007010708558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411231637771693377.post-60722192194546752092014-08-30T11:09:59.938-04:002014-08-30T11:09:59.938-04:00Great revision questions for character development...Great revision questions for character development.Mary Jo Guglielmohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14044407102808262871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411231637771693377.post-81688719191720261122014-08-30T00:56:38.882-04:002014-08-30T00:56:38.882-04:00I recognize that bag :)I recognize that bag :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09805000289453236669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411231637771693377.post-20888694202258988372014-08-28T16:04:36.315-04:002014-08-28T16:04:36.315-04:00Yes, thanks Karen. Next trip I think I'll take...Yes, thanks Karen. Next trip I think I'll take less and focus on something else "small!"Linda Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14196966007010708558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411231637771693377.post-18193733048139049432014-08-28T13:41:18.516-04:002014-08-28T13:41:18.516-04:00Linda, great advice on adding more emotion to scen...Linda, great advice on adding more emotion to scenes. It really is difficult to read your manuscript with 'fresh' eyes, but having pointers to look out for does help. You'll certainly have a lighter traveling 'writing load' thanks to Sundberg's tips!Karen Cioffihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15492421057039326702noreply@blogger.com