Why Every Author Needs To Update Their Editing Skills

 

 


Why Every Author Needs to Know Editing

 

By Carolyn Howard-Johnson

Author of The Frugal Editor: Do-It-Yourself Editing
Now In Its Third Edition

 

Last month I contributed an article “Ten Easy Ways to Keep Dialogue Sharp
to this #WritersontheMove blog with a promise to give authors reasons why
they need to know all the editing skills they can work into their busy writing 
schedule including those for writing dialogue that I covered last week. I hoped to entice
even nonfiction writers who don’t often use dialogue to start using
it. Even newspapers that once

demanded strict "who, how, were, and why leads”
 now include anecdotes in their front-page stories!

 

It surprises people when they learn that grammar rules change over time. Or that what they learned in high school or advanced grammar classes in college is either passé or may not apply to fiction. It also surprises them to learn that a perfectly edited book is never perfect because there are always so many disagreements among experts. And even experts are often misinformed. The worlds of grammar and style choices are filled with myths and misinformation like, “Never use contractions in your writing,” “Never use fragments,” and “Never end a sentence with a preposition.” Further, as my client base grew, I kept running into common misconceptions and outright annoying style choices that would never fly in the publishing world. Thus, a new edition of The Frugal Editor was a must! And, thus, I keep battling decades old misinformation about editing—especially among newer authors. 

 

But what about authors who can proudly point to decades of publishing? Well, sometimes they suffer a little hubris. They think they have done well without worrying about spending time on what they know from high school grammar classes. and therefore already know. So we’ll start off with a smattering of what is new in my The Frugal Editor in its third editionnew in that last few years, in fact! And—if you scroll a bit—you’ll find another list of editing myths you—still believe—yes! You personally—that just happen to still be lying in wait for an occasion to embarrass (humiliate!?) you:

·       The Third Edition of The Frugal Editor has been reorganized, and my publisher Victor Volkman at Modern History Press tells me I outdid myself with about 50% new (helpful!) material including new “Editor’s Extras” based on my own school of hard knocks!

·       Authors will love the all-new sections including:

o    Beta readers and peer reviewers

o    What you probably don’t know about custom dictionaries

o    Up-to-date rules for accommodating gender-specific and other cultural needs

o    A chapter for word-lovers and poets

o    Quickie reviews of word processors for you

o    What even traditionally accepted front and back matter can do for your book sales, your career, and your readers

o    Political Correctness considerations change and grow with each passing day. So, yes! Lots of updating here!

·       The Third Edition of The Frugal Editor still includes the basics that make you into an on-your-own editor when you must be. Few writers other than Stephen King can afford to hire an editor for every query letter, every media release, every media kit, every blog post. So until your career is so star-studded you can afford a publicist and editor on a retainer basis, writers need to know both the basics of editing and the little-known secrets.

·       The third edition is still loaded with reader favorites like what authors need to know about book covers—another aspect of publishing that even experienced authors might leave entirely up to others—but it’s updated!

·       New information will dispel myths like these:

o    Agents are a cantankerous lot. (Nope! In The Frugal Editor, twenty-one of the nation's best tell you their pet peeves and they do it in the best of spirits.)

o    If your English teacher told you something is OK, it is. (No! Language rules have changed since you were a sophomore. Anyway, your English teachers likely have no background in publishing, so apart from basic grammar, how much help can they be?

o    If a manuscript or query is grammar-perfect, you'll be fine. (No! Lots of things that are grammatically correct annoy publishers.)

o    Always use your Spell and Grammar Checker. (No! Some suggest you don't use it at all, but The Frugal Editorwill help you make it your partner instead of your enemy.)

o    It's easy to avoid agent and editor scams by asking other writers. Even other professionals! (The Frugal Editorgives you a to-do and not-to-do lists to help you avoid being taken even when you are doing just that. )

o    Your publisher will assign a top-flight editor. Even big five publishers are having budget problems and many cut expenses by using less experienced/qualified editors. (Maybe, but don't count on it. The more you know, the better partner you’ll be for an editor!)

o    Formatters and editors will take care of the hyphens, ellipses, and all the other grungy little punctuation marks that English teachers avoided teaching because they didn't know how to use them either. (Chances are, you'll catch even great formatters and editors—the ones you pay for their services—in an error or two if you know your stuff!

o    When you do know your stuff, you’ll feel more comfortable defying all kinds of rules that are still extant. You’ll even feel comfortable explaining to your editor why this choice is an improvement for this particular title, voice, time, or era.

 

NOTE: The parts of this article bulleted are reprints (edited and updated) from one of my sell sheets. They are widely used in publishers’ and authors’ review-getting process using query letters, ARCs, and accompanying marketing materials. Find a sample of sell sheets—front, back, and footer—in the Appendix of The Frugal Editor, third edition.

You’ll find the first part of this plea of mine for writers right here on Karen Cioffi’s Writers on the Move
blog in my column on basic dialogue tips posted  in May, 2025.

It will give you ten reasons why knowing more 
editing than your do already might make

you a better (and happier) writer . 

Go to:  
 https://www.writersonthemove.com/2025/05/dialogues-ten-basic-cant-go-wrong-rules.html

 

MORE ABOUT TODAY’S WRITERS ON THE MOVE CONTRIBUTOR


Carolyn Howard-Johnson was an instructor for the UCLA Extension Writer's Program for nearly a decade. The first book in her HowToDoItFrugally Series of books, The Frugal Book Promoter, won USA Book News' Best Professional Book Award and Book Publicists of Southern California's Irwin Award. The second, The Frugal Editor, is the winningest book in her HowToDoItFrugally Series of books for writers (The first edition was named best of 2004 by USA Book News.) TFEIII includes many more editing tips on dialogue—even punctuation for dialogue. Learn more about building a career in the publishing world at www.howtodoitfrugally.com

 

“Careers that are not fed die as readily as any living
 organism given no sustenance.


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Before Publishing: Proof it Once, Twice, Ten Times...

 

 
Contributed by Karen Cioffi, Children's Writer
 
While proofreading is the final editing stage, the final frontier, does it guarantee an error-free manuscript, article, blog post, or other form of writing?

Well, no.

Years ago, I reviewed picture books for Sylvan Dell (renamed in 2014 to Arbordale Publishing), which was, at the time, a pretty big publishing company. When I finished a math-focused picture book, I glanced at the back pages. The last spread was filled with simple math problems like
2 + 4 = 6.

Well, one of the answers was wrong. I checked it over and over. It was wrong.

I quickly emailed the woman I worked with at Sylvan Dell and let her know. She thanked me, and I never heard from her again.

Guaranteed someone got in a lot of trouble over that mistake. As far as I remember, I didn’t get Review Copies of books. The books were already published.

Another example of finding an error in a published book is a book I helped self-publish for a client.

Dealing with picture books adds another element of proofing.

Near the end of one ghosting and publishing project, the client wanted the word "Australia" added to an umbrella in an interior illustration. The story text had been meticulously edited and proofed, but I didn't check the spelling of Australia in the illustration.  

Not realizing there was an error, I helped the author self-publish it in paperback, hardcover, and ebook formats. A buyer contacted the author to let her know the word Australia was spelled wrong!

I check everything else in illustrations for consistency and accuracy. But I hadn't thought about that one word. Lesson learned.

I immediately contacted the illustrator and took care of it. Then, I republished the book.

Spelling errors in illustrations isn't something Grammarly or ProWritingAid can help with. And I don't know if a proofreader would get involved with proofing illustrations.   

My point is that there are NO guarantees in producing a 100% error-free book.

As a ghostwriter and editor, I take all kinds of precautions to ensure my clients’ work and my own work is error-free.

I use Grammarly and ProWritingAid. I also, at times, use a proofreader. I also suggest my clients read through their manuscripts, keeping an eye out for errors.

You can’t be too careful.

I even use Grammarly for my blog posts and other content I create.

But even so, if a publishing company with editors and proofreaders can make a mistake on a published book, no one should feel they are infallible.

I’m sure you’ve found errors in books, blog posts, ads, websites, and so on. It may not be often, but it happens. Some common errors include grammatical mistakes, typographical errors, punctuation issues, and formatting discrepancies.

Achieving absolute perfection is incredibly challenging. Humans, including writers and editors, are prone to errors, and the complexity of language and the writing process introduces various opportunities for mistakes.

An article at Wired.com, “Why It's So Hard to Catch Your Own Typos,” explains, “When we're proofreading our own work, we know the meaning we want to convey. Because we expect that meaning to be there, it's easier for us to miss when parts (or all) of it are absent. The reason we don't see our own typos is because what we see on the screen is competing with the version that exists in our heads.” (1)

“Why You Can’t Spot Your Own Typos,” an article at Business Insider, explains what you can do to help you see what’s on the page. “The trick with editing, then, is to de-familiarize yourself with your words as much as possible.” (2)

So, what else can you do to get as close to an error-free manuscript as possible?

Here are 14 tips to use during the proofreading stage to help minimize errors in your final manuscript:

1. Take a Break:

Before you go from editing to proofreading, take a break. It can be an hour, a day, a week, or whatever you’re comfortable with or have time for. This will help you spot errors more easily.

2. Print it Out:

Reading from a printed manuscript gives you a different perspective.

Most of my manuscripts are picture books or chapter books, so printing them out isn’t too wasteful. I do have a problem with middle-grade or YA manuscripts, though. Aside from wasting paper, there’s the ink cost.

Instead of printing, you can change the font and text size. You can even change the background color of the document.

These tweaks will help you spot errors you would might have missed in the original.

3. Grammar and Spelling Check:

Use the grammar and spell-check functions of your word processing software. However, be aware that these tools may not catch every error, so a manual review is essential.

4. Consistency Check:

Ensure that there is consistency in spelling, formatting, and style throughout the manuscript. Check for consistent use of tense, formatting of headings, and citation style, among other elements.

In one manuscript, I had the protagonist’s name spelled wrong in two places. I went through the first proofread without catching it. Thankfully, I caught it on the second run.

5. Punctuation Review:

Carefully examine punctuation marks such as commas, periods, semicolons, and quotation marks. Pay attention to proper placement and usage.

One common mistake is to forget to add dialogue quotation marks at the beginning or end of the dialogue. This can easily happen during the editing stage if you edit the dialogue.

Here’s an example:

John raced through the house, bumping into chairs, tables, and even his big sister, Sarah. “Sorry, I’m running late.”

Now, suppose you edited it to:
“Sorry, he yelled. “I’m running late.”

Notice the missing dialogue quotation after sorry. It’s an easy miss.

6. Editing Tool:

If your budget allows, use an editing program like Grammarly or ProWritingAid. These tools can be very helpful.

They also have AI capabilities and offer suggestions on rephrasing sections of your manuscript for better understanding and tight writing, among other things.

It’s important to realize, though, that they are not infallible either.

7. Formatting Check:

Verify that your manuscript adheres to the specified formatting guidelines. This includes margins, font styles, line spacing, and other formatting requirements.

I make notes I can quickly access so I don’t have to retrace my steps to find out things like line spacing from the top of the page to the chapter heading to the chapter content.

8. Cross-Check References:

If your manuscript includes references, citations, or footnotes, double-check them for accuracy and consistency. Be sure all citations are correctly formatted and match the bibliography or reference list.

9. Check Headings and Subheadings:

Confirm that your headings and subheadings are appropriately formatted and consistent throughout the document.

It’s helpful to have notes to keep everything uniform.

10. Read Aloud:

This is a very helpful step. Reading your manuscript aloud can help you identify awkward phrasing, repetition, and errors that might be overlooked during silent reading.

If you pause while reading, the reader definitely will.

11. Review Tables and Figures:

If your manuscript includes tables, figures, or other graphical elements, make sure they are labeled and formatted correctly.

12. Check Page Numbers:

Ensure that page numbers are in the correct order and that they match any table of contents or index.

13. Final Review of Changes:

If you made revisions or edits during the proofreading process, do a final review to ensure all changes have been implemented correctly.

14. Seek Help:

Having a fresh set of eyes on the manuscript during the proofreading stage is beneficial.

Consider asking a colleague, friend (only if they know what they’re looking for), or a professional proofreader to review your work.

If your budget allows, I strongly advise hiring a professional proofreader.

Summing It Up

While achieving a completely error-free manuscript may be challenging, a thorough and diligent review process can significantly reduce the number of errors and improve the overall quality of your work.
 
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ABOUT THE AUTHOR
 

 
Karen Cioffi is an award-winning children’s author, working ghostwriter, rewriter, and coach (picture, chapter, and middle-grade books). If you need help with your story, visit Writing for Children with Karen Cioffi.

Karen also offers authors:

HOW TO WRITE A CHILDREN'S FICTION BOOK
A DIY book to help you write your own children’s book.

FICTION WRITING FOR CHILDREN eCOURSE
4-Week / 8 Sections Guided Self-Study Mentoring Program

You can connect with Karen at:
LinkedIn: https://www.linkedin.com/in/karencioffiventrice
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/kcioffiventrice/
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/karencioffikidlitghostwriter/
 

 
 

Why Every Author Needs To Update Their Editing Skills

    Why Every Author Needs to Know Editing   By Carolyn Howard-Johnson Author of  The Frugal Editor: Do-It-Yourself Editing Now In Its Third...