Showing posts with label Writers on the Move. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writers on the Move. Show all posts

Opportunity Is Everywhere

 


By Terry Whalin (@terrywhalin)

David Smith loved language and ignited an excitement in his English teaching at Peru High School in Peru, Indiana during the late 1960s. Of modest height with receding sandy hair and a bug-eyed appearance, Mr. Smith loved his students and reached out to challenge them. As the faculty supervisor for the school newspaper, Mr. Smith was always on the lookout for new talent to add to the staff. Thus, he was excited when a gangly sophomore who had recently transferred from Towson, Maryland, caught Mr. Smith’s attention with one of his written assignments.

One day after class, Mr. Smith pulled that teenager aside and said, “Terry, I think you would make a great addition to our newspaper writing staff. I’d like to invite you to our next staff meeting on Wednesday after school. Can you come?” At that point in the school year, I had made few friends, so I was flattered with his invitation. Another classmate, Jeff Reece, and I became the two sportswriters on the staff. Throughout the school year, I attended various sports events, collected sports data, and started interviewing people. Those first days on the staff newspaper introduced me to the writing world and the thrill of writing something for other people to read in print. Mr. Smith’s simple invitation sent my life on a different career path and awakened my dreams of publishing. My writing became more than a dream; now it was rooted in practical experience and repeated opportunities to practice my craft.
The events in your experience will be distinct from mine yet are equally important. There are vast opportunities in the publishing world for anyone willing to follow the steps to speed up their success. Like the image with this article, there are many diferent doors and you have to select one, then another. Welcome to an imperfect process. I’m excited about how the events will come together for your journey

On the surface, the path to publishing might not show you the diversity and range of possibilities for your writing. From speaking to hundreds of writers, I find many of them are focused on a particular area of writing such as writing a novel or a children’s book. They haven’t understood the value of learning good storytelling and communication skills that are relevant and useful for many different areas of writing. 

Because these writers are focused on a small niche area of publishing, it’s almost like they are wearing blinders and can’t see any other possibilities. In this section, I want to challenge you to remove your blinders and see the wealth of possible application for your writing within the publishing community. While each area of publishing has its own specific requirements, good writing and storytelling skills can be used in multiple areas to strengthen your overall career.

For example, you may want to write a book and have done a little exploration but the only companies who have responded to your questions are the publishers who want you to pay them to get your book into print. These companies are called self-publishers. Instead, you are looking for a traditional publisher who will pay you an advance, then print and distribute your book. Yet because you have no background in book publishing, you don’t understand that 90 percent of nonfiction books are contracted from a book proposal and a few sample chapters, rather than a complete book manuscript. Without this critical detail, you have focused on writing a full-length book manuscript. Then you discover it may take you 12 months to find a literary agent who has to locate the right publisher. Then you learn it will take a longer-than-expected span of time for this publisher to release your book—normally 12 to 24 months after you turn in your manuscript. To a beginner, this realistic and practical publishing timeframe isn’t evident on the surface.

Also, writers don’t understand they can gain valuable training, experience, and exposure through writing magazine articles. From idea to assignment to publication with a printed magazine can be a much shorter timeframe for four to six months than books. Every editor is actively looking for writers who can communicate—whether they are a newsletter editor, an online editor, a magazine editor, a book editor or anyone else who has the title “editor.” As a young magazine editor, I quickly learned I had to do less editorial work and could have greater confidence in assigning an article to a published author than an unpublished author. I read the ideas and considered giving the assignment to the unpublished author but their chances dramatically improved with any type of publishing experience.

Magazine and newspaper writers learn valuable skills that help their success with a longer project such as a book. These writers learn to write for a specific audience or publication and to write within a specific word length. Also through the writing process, they learn the value of a focused headline or title and relevant subheads scattered throughout the article, as well as hooking the reader with a tightly written opening. Then they continue to feed information to the reader as they structure their writing, and conclude the article with a focused point called a “takeaway.” These writers also learn the importance of meeting a specific deadline (or a better way to stand out with the editor is to complete their assignment before the deadline). 

In addition, writers can learn the skill of rewriting and following an editor’s direction. Sometimes your article will be “almost there” but not quite. Can you follow the editor’s directions and complete the assignment to their satisfaction? It’s much easier to learn about this process on a 1200-word magazine article than a 50,000-word book project.

Finally, these writers built trusted relationships with their editors—newspaper and magazine. Many of the editors I’ve worked with have moved up to higher paying publications or have become book editors or editorial directors. The seeds of my relationship with them were planted through my magazine writing. As a new writer you need to understand the necessity of building these lasting relationships.

Your journey to publication will be completely different from my experience. It will at times startle and surprise you. The writing business is a strange mixture of creative combined with practical “how-to” skills. These pages are signposts, and every step may not be critical for you. For example, you may not care about writing children’s books or short stories, yet I would encourage you to read and explore this type of writing. If you try it and it fits your writing style, it may be the key to expanding your writing world and I’d hate you to miss it.

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W. Terry Whalin, a writer and acquisitions editor lives in California. Get Terrys newsletter and a 87-page FREE ebook packed with writing insights. Just follow this link to subscribe. A former magazine editor and former literary agent, Terry is an acquisitions editor at Morgan James Publishing. He has written more than 60 nonfiction books including  Jumpstart Your Publishing Dreams and Billy Graham. Get Terry’s recent book, 10 Publishing Myths for only $10, free shipping and bonuses worth over $200. To help writers catch the attention of editors and agents, Terry wrote his bestselling Book Proposals That $ell, 21 Secrets To Speed Your SuccessHis website is located at: www.terrywhalin.com. Connect with Terry on TwitterFacebook and LinkedIn.

Writing: Setting the Mood

 

Contributed by Margot Conor 

Crafting Emotion and Atmosphere in Writing.

Why Mood Matters

Every story carries a current beneath its plot, a subtle emotional tone that guides how the reader experiences events. This is mood: the atmosphere that lingers around a scene, created not by what happens, but by how it is told. A love story may take place in a garden, but whether that garden feels tranquil, eerie, or oppressive depends entirely on mood.

Writers who understand mood can shift a reader’s emotions without ever naming them directly. They conjure sorrow without saying “sad,” and build dread without mentioning fear. Mood is the difference between description that merely informs and description that transports.

The Building Blocks of Mood

1. Descriptive Language and Word Choice
Every word carries emotional weight. Consider the difference between describing a room as dim versus shadow-choked. Both mean there is little light, but the second leans toward menace. Similarly, a breeze suggests gentleness, while a gust can feel intrusive or restless. Precision in word choice is one of the most powerful tools for setting mood.

2. Imagery and Sensory Detail
Mood flourishes when writing appeals to the senses. Sight may be the most obvious, but sounds, textures, and even smells can deepen atmosphere. A creaking floorboard, the sticky grip of humid air, the metallic tang of blood in the mouth… these details can evoke an entire emotional world.

3. Rhythm and Sentence Structure
The cadence of prose influences how readers feel. Long, flowing sentences can lull or soothe, while short, clipped phrases quicken the pace and heighten tension. Consider how a passage in Virginia Woolf can feel meditative, while Hemingway’s terse sentences convey urgency. Rhythm is the invisible pulse of mood.

Techniques for Enhancing Atmosphere

1. Show Through the Environment
Setting often reflects or amplifies the emotional tone. Gothic writers knew this well: crumbling castles, storm clouds, and hollow winds echo inner turmoil. But even in modern realism, surroundings shape mood. Like a sunlit café warms a scene of reunion, while a sterile hospital corridor chills it.

2. Weather as Emotional Mirror
Though sometimes cliché, weather can be used with subtlety to underline atmosphere. A sudden downpour can feel cleansing or ominous, depending on context. Fog blurs not only the landscape but also certainty, mystery, or fear.

3. Symbolism and Motif
Recurring images create consistency of mood. Repetition of water imagery might bring calm or unease depending on how it is framed. Colors are another powerful tool, red can suggest passion or danger, blue serenity or sorrow. Symbolic language layers meaning onto mood.

4. Contrast and Juxtaposition
Mood sharpens when placed against its opposite. A joyous wedding scene may feel even brighter when set after a moment of grief. Laughter can echo uncomfortably in a tense setting, turning joy into something uncanny.

Some examples from literature you might have read:

Edgar Allan Poe mastered gothic atmosphere, weaving dread into every creaking door and flickering shadow. His word choices drip with menace, leaving no doubt of the intended mood.

Toni Morrison layered lyrical, sensory-rich language to create moods of both beauty and brutality, allowing readers to inhabit the emotional truths of her characters.

Kazuo Ishiguro sustains quiet melancholy in novels like “The Remains of the Day,” where understatement and restraint foster a mood of longing and regret.

Ray Bradbury in “Something Wicked This Way Comes” builds mood with sensory lushness. The smell of autumn leaves, the distant calliope… where nostalgia and dread intermingle.

ABOUT THE AUTHOR

Margot Conor has been writing for as long as she can remember, but it wasn't until the COVID lock-down that she had enough time to dedicate to the craft and bring something to completion. Having finished her first novel, she went through the grueling two-year process of editing. Now she has jumped into the author's world with both feet. Margot's debut multiverse adventure novel, Inverse, is available on Amazon. 

She's spent the last year attending many writing retreats, seminars, and writers' events. She also listened to presentations specifically on the topic of publishing and book marketing. She will be sharing what she learns with the reader. Learn more about Margot at https://margotconor.com/


Why Self-Publishing Books Aren't in Bookstores


By Terry Whalin (@terrywhalin)

I’m involved in a couple of online writing groups and no matter how many times you say it, there seems to be a broad misconception about self-published books. These books simply don’t appear inside the brick-and-mortar bookstores.

Please don’t misunderstand me. These self-published books have their place in the market—particularly if you have a means to sell the books to individuals or companies. For example, if you speak often and would like to have a book to sell in the back of the room, you can easily get a self-published book to use in these situations. Just don’t expect to sell your book to bookstores.

Recently a well-meaning author celebrated his first printed book, which was self-published. He was holding it in his hand—always exciting. He was plotting a strategy to get his book in as many bookstores as possible and asking for help from other authors in the group. If you are going down this path, it shows a clear disconnect with the realities of the market.

Here’s a bit of what I told him. “Congratulations on your book release and I celebrate with you—but after more than thirty years in this business and over 60 books in print—and working as an acquisitions editor over the last thirteen years—I am going to have to give you a bit of a reality check. You will struggle and find it almost impossible for brick-and-mortar bookstores to stock your self-published book. It’s one of those messages that the self-publishing places don’t tell you (they want to get your cash and get your book in their system). Yes, your book is listed on Amazon.com (easy for anyone to do) but getting it into the bookstores is a completely different story. 

I’ve been telling writers for years about the ease of getting a book printed—now getting it into the bookstores and ultimately into the hands of consumers, that’s another story.
“Retailers dislike self-published books. Every retailer that I’ve talked with about this issue (and I’ve invested the time to talk with them) has countless stories about the difficulties of these books. They have re-stocking problems and problems with the quality of the products (typos, editing, etc.).

“Here’s the real test for you: go to your local bookstores and ask them if they are carrying any self-published title on their shelves. Go to the big box stores like Barnes & Noble or Books A Million as well as your mom and pop smaller independent bookstores. The answer will surprise you. I will be surprised if you find a single self-published among any of the thousands of books.”

We can’t say it often enough—the bookstore market is a closed system—that deals with distributors and large and small publishers. It’s why we work hard to get our books into the traditional publishing marketplace. It’s why you go through the effort and hard work to create an excellent book proposal or book manuscript or novel, then sell that idea to a publisher. Then your book is available in any bookstore—and can have the possibility of sitting on those bookshelves. It’s a free country and you can feel free to expend the effort and energy to market to bookstores and try and place your book. From my experience and others, it will be frustrating and likely not sell many books. I believe your marketing efforts are better served in other markets (outside the bookstore).”

No matter what I write, several of you are going to take the leap into self-publishing. Here’s several action steps if you go this route:

1. Work with an experienced editor to create an excellent book.

2. Use a professional cover designer and people to format and produce a book where every detail looks like something from one of the big five traditional publishers. This means including elements like endorsements and words on the spine of the book (including a publishing logo on the bottom of that spine). Many self-published books are missing key elements which become striking signals they are self-published such as leaving off the barcode or doing this code improperly (without the price). 

3. Keep working consistently to grow your audience. As I’ve mentioned in the past, work daily on increasing your platform and reaching your audience. You need to try new avenues to market and sell your book. For example, in recent months, I have been using PodMatch which is connected to over 90,000 podcasts. I’ve booked or been on over 60 podcasts. I continue to pitch podcast hosts and appear on their shows.

4. Continue to learn all you can about publishing. Get a free copy of my Book Proposals That Sell and study the publishing insights in this book. 

5. Never give up on your book. As the author, you have the greatest interest and passion for your book. This statement is true no matter whether you are traditionally published or self-published. Always be looking for new opportunities to write or speak about your book.

This last point is something I try and model with my own books. For example, I continue to promote and use the radio interviews I recorded for my Billy Graham biography which has been in print for over ten years. Each author needs to be actively telling new readers about their books—whether they are carried in the bookstores or not. 

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W. Terry Whalin, a writer and acquisitions editor lives in California. Get Terrys newsletter and a 87-page FREE ebook packed with writing insights. Just follow this link to subscribe. A former magazine editor and former literary agent, Terry is an acquisitions editor at Morgan James Publishing. He has written more than 60 nonfiction books including  Jumpstart Your Publishing Dreams and Billy Graham. Get Terry’s recent book, 10 Publishing Myths for only $10, free shipping and bonuses worth over $200. To help writers catch the attention of editors and agents, Terry wrote his bestselling Book Proposals That $ell, 21 Secrets To Speed Your SuccessHis website is located at: www.terrywhalin.com. Connect with Terry on TwitterFacebook and LinkedIn.

Writing: Mixing It Up with Tropes

 

Contributed by Margot Conor

I have lately been experimenting. I mostly write Science Fiction and Fantasy. But I do tend to mix tropes most of the time. Recently I have been trying a few new subgenres.

An author in a critique group told me she liked my Magical Realism style. And I had to admit I didn’t know what that was. When I searched for authors that are known for it and discovered they are some of my favorites. Jorge Luis Borges, Gabriel Garcia Marquez, Isabel Allende. I suppose we are inspired by the authors we love.

After reading about what characterizes Magical Realism, I wrote a few short stories with that trope in mind. Consciously leaning into that style, I was pleased with the results.

Magical Realism combines realistic settings with fantastical or magical elements, treating the supernatural as commonplace within the narrative. Key characteristics include a realistic setting, the matter-of-fact inclusion of magical elements, a blurring of the lines between reality and fantasy, and often, a focus on everyday characters in dream-like, or unbelievable situations which are treated as normal.

While researching tropes I saw a few others I decided to experiment with.

One is something called slipstream. Which I also had never heard of. This has the distinctive quality of defying traditional genre boundaries, by mixing sci-Fi, and Fantasy with psychological or philosophical fiction. It explores deeper themes of societal or technological change, and the breakdown of paradigms. It employs strange and uncanny situations. Encourages the bending of reality with surreal settings or circumstances. It is otherwise described as “the familiar strange, or the strange familiar.

I had never written in the Steam Punk subgenre until recently either, I wrote a short story titled Magic Wants to Be Used. I love the characters and the world I created enough to possibly serialize it. This story’s main character is a teenager named Xandra who has a forbidden form of mechanical magic.

I also recently compiled a small set of nine fantasy stories featuring dragons. I’ve been writing fantasy for a while but oddly never touched the dragon lore sub-genre. I am not sure it is still as popular as it once was, but it was fun to write.

There are a few writers in one of my writers’ groups who write romantic fantasy. I know that any sort of romance genre is extremely popular now, and an easy genre to build a loyal following with. But other than inserting a few flirtations into the speculative genres I write, romance seems to be near impossible for me to write.

I seem to have found my favorites, and I’ll stick with them. I encourage writers to explore as I have been doing, just to see what might inspire you. Every now and then it is good to step outside what we usually do and explore a slightly different direction.

ABOUT THE AUTHOR 

Margot Conor has been writing for as long as she can remember, but it wasn't until the COVID lock-down that she had enough time to dedicate to the craft and bring something to completion. Having finished her first novel, she went through the grueling two-year process of editing. Now she has jumped into the author's world with both feet. Margot's debut multiverse adventure novel, Inverse, is available on Amazon.

She's spent the last year attending many writing retreats, seminars, and writers' events. She also listened to presentations specifically on the topic of publishing and book marketing. She will be sharing what she learns with the reader. Learn more about Margot at https://margotconor.com/


 

 

Are You a Writing Imposter?


I watched an amazing webinar with Writers on the Move contributor Carolyn Howard-Johnson and her publisher Victor Volkman.

Carolyn is an award-winning author and an expert book marketer, so I listen when she has something to share.

A small part of her talk was about the imposter syndrome. Making it easier to understand, it's more like the 'I'm not good enough' syndrome.

This is something most writers deal with once in a while, me included, so I decided to look into it.

According to Wikipedia, the "imposter syndrome is a psychological pattern in which an individual doubts their skills, talents or accomplishments and has a persistent internalized fear of being exposed as a fraud."

So, what does this have to do with writers?

Well, once we feel we're not ‘really’ a good writer, we begin to underestimate our ability and our value.

Unfortunately, this syndrome seeps its way into new and even seasoned writers, and it can cause consequences.

The I'm not a good enough writer syndrome, or I'm a fraud, and sooner or later, everyone will know.

Have you ever felt like this?

Once a writer has these feelings, they can fester and grow, stopping her from moving forward. 

Maybe she's been thinking of seeking an agent's representation.

He may have thought of submitting to traditional publishers.

Maybe he's wanted to get articles published in magazines like Writer's Digest, The Writer, or another magazine. 

BUT …

She doesn't think she's good enough, so she doesn't even try.

There's an expression I love: Nothing ventured, nothing gained.

You don't have to be the best writer on Earth.

It's not the best writer who succeeds; it's the writer who perseveres. And part of perseverance is to submit your work. 

It's about writing the book you want to write and self-publishing if that's the route you want to go.

It's about submitting your manuscript to agents and publishers.

That said, it is important to make sure you, at the very least, know how to write. 

- Read a lot.

- Read books the agent has represented if that's what you want to do.

- Read books that the publisher has published if that’s your dream.

- Read 'quality' books in the genre you want to write.

- Take the time to learn how to write if you haven't yet. There are excellent online classes that can help you with this.

Another problem is if a writer with this syndrome offers services like editing or ghostwriting. 

If you're offering writing services and don't believe you're qualified enough to provide these services, you're in trouble. 

- The first thing that will happen is you won't charge what you're worth. This thought process can cause a domino effect. 

- Your lower prices will cause some potential clients to believe you're not as good as other services charging more.

- You may let clients tell you how to write. Or, you may not be confident to explain to your client that what he has done or wants to do won't work.

- You'll second-guess almost everything you do.

If you have these feelings, it might be helpful to create a vision board.

Put a few quotes or sayings that will help you believe in yourself. Be sure to keep it where you'll see it every day!

And another good idea is to keep learning your craft.

Learning to write also goes for wannabe authors. Learn about writing by reading books in the genre you want to write in, and then go for it.

Click the link to watch Carolyn's talk - it has lots of book marketing tips: 
https://youtu.be/ykE7ITz6HUk

 

ABOUT THE AUTHOR 




 

 

 

 

Karen Cioffi is an award-winning children’s author, working ghostwriter, rewriter, and coach (picture and chapter books). If you need help with your story, visit Writing for Children with Karen Cioffi.


You can check out Karen’s books HERE.

https://karencioffiwritingforchildren.com/karens-books/

 

 


Avoid Publishing Pitfalls

By Terry Whalin (@terrywhalin)

It’s rare that I see this perspective but, in this article, I want to give you a reality check. From my decades in this business, I understand book publishing is filled with possible pitfalls and errors.  

I witnessed another one recently. One of my bestselling author friends was about to release a new book. This new book was from a major well-known publisher. The book was designed well and edited and included endorsements and practical information. I’ve supported this author in the past, so I was on the list of people who got a pre-release copy of the book. This pre-release included a personal handwritten note from the author and information about the date of the book release.

It was a push for my schedule, but I managed to quickly write a review and be ready to post it on the launch date. Then I noticed the page on Amazon. It was not the typical pre-release page. Instead the book had already been released a couple of days before the launch date. The book had zero Amazon reviews on the page. How did this happen? Someone at the publishing house set up the wrong Amazon date for releasing the book (my guess). 

This author has a launch team and other elements in place to promote her book. I was not surprised to learn this team was in place since she is an experienced author and knows the elements of launching a new book. It is important to have a launch team because there are over 4,500 new books being released every day. Other places say 11,000 new books every day. Whichever number you want to use, it’s a large amount of new books entering the marketplace. I regularly hear that most publishers are selling about 50% of their books through Amazon, that leaves another 50% for brick and mortar, other online retailers, and other places. Still 50% is a large number at Amazon for the book sales.

I’m writing these details about this cautionary tale which contains a number of lessons:

1. Details matter. The release date of your book should match up on Amazon, Barnes & Noble and other places. As an author, you can check some of these details but depending on how you publish, they are usually handled internally inside the publishing house.

2. With the launch of a book, things can go wrong. When this happens to you, acknowledge it and keep moving forward.

3. Nothing is fatal in this process—unless you quit. Even when something goes wrong or doesn’t happen, you can still recover from it and sell books. The only way for you to be stopped is when you give up and quit. Almost anything can be overcome with action.

4. Marketing is an ongoing process for every book.  Recently one of my books got a new review. I was interested in reading it. When I looked, it was a one-star review with hardly any information. If you only have five star reviews for your book and then someone gives you a one-star review, it validates all the other reviews for the book. In other words, there is nothing to do about the negative review but keep moving forward. In fact, if you get enough five star reviews, the one-star review will have little or no impact. I encourage you to do the same.

I hope this story helps and encourages you with your own marketing efforts for your book. It is not easy for anyone, even people with a lot of experience in this area. The key is to keep going and keep moving forward no matter what happens. 

From the stories that I hear I understand authors are trying to find the magic bullet or the perfect place to tell people about their book. The reality is success and book sales are not based on a single event or single television appearance. Instead, success comes from continual and steady efforts from the author to promote their book. Your publisher may be able to get the books into the brick and mortar bookstores. It is the author who drives people into the bookstores to sell those books and move them into reader’s hands and not be returned to the publisher.

As the great hockey player Wayne Gretzky said, “You miss 100% of the shots you don’t take.”  Opportunity is around us and you need to keep seizing it and going forward even with the pitfalls. The authors who continue are still writing and still touching lives. I want you to be among this distinct group. 

Your publishing pitfalls will be different from mine or those possibilities that I detailed in this article. When they happen (and they will happen), it’s critical to not give up and keep going.

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W. Terry Whalin, a writer and acquisitions editor lives in California. Get Terrys newsletter and a 87-page FREE ebook packed with writing insights. Just follow this link to subscribe. A former magazine editor and former literary agent, Terry is an acquisitions editor at Morgan James Publishing. He has written more than 60 nonfiction books including  Jumpstart Your Publishing Dreams and Billy Graham. Get Terry’s recent book, 10 Publishing Myths for only $10, free shipping and bonuses worth over $200. To help writers catch the attention of editors and agents, Terry wrote his bestselling Book Proposals That $ell, 21 Secrets To Speed Your SuccessHis website is located at: www.terrywhalin.com. Connect with Terry on TwitterFacebook and LinkedIn.

When Words Don’t Say What You Want Them To


How to Avoid Embarrassment Using the History of Words

When Is Nice Anything but Nice

By Carolyn Howard-Johnson, author of the newly released
Third Edition of 
The Frugal Editor

My favorite resources for keeping up with ever-shifting English grammar appear to be games at first glance, something I prefer not to waste my time on but somehow also get hooked on. Still, I have several quickie newsletters that appear in my mailbox because with the first few—the likes of Word Genius and Word Smart—I realized they were great tools for editors—and for those occasions when all writers choose to break that rule about always hiring a professional editor. You know when you do it, and I know when I do it—usually when I’m in a hurry or when I’m writing promotional material. Ahem! 

I sometimes break another rule, too. I subscribe to these letters when new ones arrive unbidden, unannounced, and unrecommended. As an editor who knows that smart editors need to hire editors whenever possible, too, I find they help me keep my skills ahead of the curve. That I have never unsubscribed is informal proof of their value.

Sometime in about 2023 one of these letters asked,  “Have you ever stopped to think about the true meanings behind the words we use every day? While we may use these words without a second thought, they often carry deeper significance and historical context that we may not be aware of… .”

That quotation lead me to the word nice which I have long subconsciously avoided. And I have recently been annoyed with a new series of TV ads—probably a very expensive one—that assumes women everywhere prefer the word “nice” over “artistic,” “stylish,” or any of the other possibilities listed in about any thesaurus a writer might use. The producers must have no notion of the word’s history or even a built-in awareness that there might be times it is better avoided.

Of course, we have all used nice to mean something agreeable. But originally it meant something quite different and, as words are prone to do, morphed over time. Think of the  word bad as a recent example of just such a change. Occasionally one of those alphabetical generations who began to use it to mean its opposite. I am aware of it, but it still throws me for a loop when they do! 

A caveat: When youre writing, you cant count on the tone of voice to indicate satire. There are ways to do it with dialogue, description, context. But you have to identify the problem to use one of those techniques. 

Nice derives from the Latin nesius which means unknowing or ignorant. That eventually changed to suggest foolish or simple before landing on its current most-commonly used meaning. Still, occasionally we become aware of its double meaning, usually from the tone of voice used to indicate irony as in “Well, ain’t that just nice.” When the word nice comes to mind for us writers, it might be a good time to click on the synonym feature of your word processor to find a word that is less loaded with hidden meanings. 

Take special care with some words or phrases being used in the news these days. They have come to be referred to as dog whistles. In politics it might be referred to as code. You might not catch the meaning, but the most radical members will. Some of their history might impart an unintended association with the humankind’s least admirable tendencies. Of course, when you spot one it’s your decision to use it…or not.

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With each issue of Karen Cioffi’s #WritersontheMove blog, Carolyn Howard-Johnson shares something writer-related she hopes might save some author from embarrassment (or make the task of writing more fun or creative). The third edition of The Frugal Editor from Modern History Press includes a chapter on some of the words most misused by the very people whose business it is to know them and to give publishers and authors the exposure needed to reach bestseller status. It is the second multi award-winning book in her HowToDoItFrugally Series of books for writers with lots of those important changes in it like the new uses for gender pronouns and a chapter on how backmatter can be extended to inform readers as well as nudge book sales all within the realm of acceptable practices—ancient or new. Find it on Amazon’s new buy-page offered in for paper, hard cover, or e-book series. (The availability of that new page for book series Amazon offers authors is another of the #FrugalBookPromoterTips she posts on Twitter (X).)

 

Writing for Children - 10 Rules

 

Contributed by Karen Cioffi, Children's Ghostwriter, Rewriter

 Before I became a children’s writer, I wrote marketing and health articles. Writing in multiple genres, writing for children can be much more challenging. 

When writing for children, there are guidelines to keep in mind to help your story avoid the editor’s trash pile. And if you’re self-publishing, the children’s writing guidelines help you create an engaging and marketable book.

Here is a list of 10 rules to refer to when writing for young children:

1. Keep it safe.

Be sure your story does not suggest dangerous or inappropriate behavior. Keeping children safe is the most important item on this list.

Example: The protagonist (main character) sneaks out of the house early in the morning while his parents are still sleeping.

This is a no-no!

2. Age-appropriate words, dialogue and action.

-You wouldn’t use the word remote for a first grader. You would use far.  
-A seven-year-old wouldn’t speak like a twelve-year-old. 
-A seven-year-old wouldn’t walk a half mile alone to go to a park or go in a pool without adult supervision. 

3. Age-appropriate problem.

The protagonist should have an age-appropriate problem or dilemma that’s established at the beginning of the story. 

Let the action/conflict rise. Then, have the protagonist, through thought process and problem-solving skills, solve it on his own. If an adult is involved, keep the input and help at a bare minimum.

Kids love action and problem-solving! 

4. Point of view.

The story should have a single point of view (POV). Writing a single POV means that it doesn’t exist if your protagonist can’t see, hear, touch, or feel it.

Example: “Mary crossed her eyes behind Joe’s back.” If Joe is the protagonist, this can’t happen because Joe wouldn’t be able to see it.

5. Sentence structure. 

When writing for young children, keep sentences short; keep adjectives and adverbs to a minimum. And be careful of your punctuation and grammar.

6. Show rather than tell.

Write your story by showing through action and dialogue rather than telling.

You can use your imagination for this one. Picture how the child might behave or react. Will his arms flail? Will he narrow his eyes? Will she cry? Will she run away or stand her ground?

If you can’t seem to find the right words to show a scene, try using dialogue instead; it’s an easy alternative.

7. Write tight.

Don’t say something with ten words if you can do it with five. 

Watch for unnecessary words (adjectives and adverbs). Use strong verbs. And pay special attention to “ly” words.

8. Watch the timeframe for the story. 

Picture books should be kept within several hours to a day or two. On the outside, a week or two. 

A fun story, Stephanie’s Ponytail by Robert Munsch, has a timespan of five days. 

9. A character arc.

Along with the protagonist’s solution to the conflict, she should grow in some way as a result of the journey.

An example would be if a protagonist starts out unsure and afraid but becomes confident by the end of the story.

10. Use a thesaurus and a book of similes. 

Finding just the right word or simile can make the difference between a good story and a great story.

Summing It Up

Using these techniques will help you create effective children’s stories. Another important tool to use in your writing tool belt is joining a children’s writing critique group. No matter how long you’ve been writing, you can always use another set of eyes. 

If you’re a beginning writer and unpublished, you should join a group with published and unpublished members. Having published and experienced writers in the group will help you hone your craft.


 ABOUT THE AUTHOR

 
Karen Cioffi is an award-winning children’s author, working ghostwriter, rewriter, and coach (picture and chapter books). If you need help with your story, visit Writing for Children with Karen Cioffi
 


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