Contributed by Karen Cioffi, Children's Writer
Most of my clients know what they want the takeaway of their book to be.
It may be to demonstrate kindness, overcome fear, be a good friend, learn responsibility, learn about conservation, become self-confident, learn coping strategies, realize the importance of family…
Now and then, though, I still get clients who think a list of events constitutes a good story. They have a tough time understanding the elements that need to go into making a story work, such as character arc, story arc, plot, and a story’s takeaway.
WHAT IS A BOOK’S TAKEAWAY?
The takeaway in children’s writing refers to the central message, moral, or theme that readers are meant to understand or remember after finishing the story. It's what leaves an impact, inspires thought, or teaches a lesson. In children’s literature, the takeaway is typically simple, clear, and age-appropriate, often woven seamlessly into the story, and should be conveyed subtly.
The takeaway is what the reader will find memorable, leaving a lasting impression that will hopefully prompt the reader to consider new perspectives or apply the information learned to their own lives.
EXAMPLES OF TAKEAWAYS IN CHILDREN’S WRITING
Picture book: “Stephanie’s Ponytail” by Robert Munsch.
Stephanie's upset because the kids in her class copy every hairdo she creates. Finally, she outwits them, and they never copy her hairdo again.
As well as being a fun read, the takeaway teaches children about creativity, independence, self-confidence, imagination, and being daring.
Chapter book: “Walking Through Walls” by Karen Cioffi
The protagonist, Wang, begins his journey as a selfish, lazy kid. But striving to become rich and powerful, his heart is awakened to what riches and power really mean.
The takeaway is two-fold: not all things are as they appear, and richness and power can be more than gaining external things. It touches on friendship, loyalty, honesty, and hard work.
TIPS ON CRAFTING TAKEAWAYS IN CHILDREN’S WRITING
It's All About Subtlety:
Avoid overt preaching; let the actions and consequences of the characters deliver the message.
Example: Instead of saying, “Sharing is good,” show a character sharing their toys and making a new friend.
Make It Relatable:
Focus on themes children experience, like friendship, bravery, or honesty.
Example: A boy overcomes his fear of public speaking to join the school play, teaching bravery and confidence.
Keep It Age-Appropriate:
Simplify complex themes for younger readers. For older kids, explore deeper ideas like compassion or resilience.
End on a Positive Note:
Even if the story includes struggles or setbacks, it should leave readers with hope or encouragement.
TAKEAWAY IN PRACTICE
Imagine you’re writing a story about a lonely dragon who learns to write poems that bring joy to the townspeople.
The takeaway could be: “Using your unique talents can connect you to others.” Instead of saying this outright, you’d show how the dragon’s poetry gradually breaks down fears and builds friendships.
The key is to balance storytelling with meaning, allowing the message to shine through the actions and emotions of the characters.
So, as you’re writing your children’s story, think of the takeaway. What message do you want to instill in the reader?
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
Karen Cioffi is an award-winning children’s author, working ghostwriter, rewriter, and coach. If you need help with your story, visit Writing for Children with Karen Cioffi.
You can check out Karen’s books HERE.
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