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Create Less Than Perfect Characters |
"Create Less than Perfect Characters" by Joan Y. Edwards
In
order to create less than perfect characters, each character must have a
flaw. It's okay to dream up a character with more than one flaw.
Brainstorming your character with different types of flaws may help you
decide which one creates the most havoc for him in his particular
situation. You could group three primary flaws that are characteristic
of one particular gigantic shortcoming for your character. However, you
may want one flaw that signals their defining trait.
Flaw,
according to the Google dictionary, is a mark, fault, or other
imperfection that mars a substance or object. For example: The outlet
store sold plates with flaws in them. Synonyms for flaw are defect,
blemish, fault, imperfection, deficiency, weakness, weak
spot/point/link, inadequacy, shortcoming, limitation, failing, or
foible.
In 1993, to focus attention and resources to eliminate
accidents and human error, Gordon Dupont, a worker in maintenance for
Transport Canada developed the following Dirty Dozen list of causes for
human mistakes at work:
http://www.skybrary.aero/index.php/The_Human_Factors_%22Dirty_Dozen%22
- Lack of communication
- Distraction
- Lack of Resources
- Stress
- Complacency - a feeling of quiet pleasure or security, unaware of potential danger, defect, or the like.
- Lack of Teamwork
- Pressure (of deadline)
- Lack of Awareness
- Lack of Knowledge
- Fatigue
- Lack of Assertiveness-don't feel free or not allowed to speak up
- Norms-the way you've always done it
These
could cause life-changing situations for your characters. But you don't
want your characters to get hurt. I understand. About 6 years ago, Pam
Zollman told writers you have to hurt your "bunnies" (characters). Oh
my goodness! As a writer you may be a "Mother Hen or "Protective Father"
and don't want anything to happen to your little ones. However, to have
a plot, to have a story at all, means that you must create something
bad to happen to your main character. That's
bad, spelled and pronounced
B-a-a-a-a-d.
After the bad experience, watch him meet the challenge. I promise you
that your character will meet any challenge you give him. He will make
it out of the darkest corner. With your help, how can he fail?
To
look at the dark side, the darkest corners of films, watch a few film
noir from the 1940's to late 1950's. The Guardian lists the
Top 10 Film Noir movies
and a summary of each one and why it was good. Film noir was usually in
black and white. It may have been an American Detective or crime film
that emphasized cynical attitudes and sexual motivations. It seemed to
me that no character in a film noir ever reached the good side of human
behavior. One person, the detective who solved the mystery, may have
been the only one on the right side. According to
Fandor,
the noir style has expressionism and realism with night scenarios,
strong shadows, low-key lighting, dynamic compositions, hard-boiled
dialogue, flashbacks, fragmented narratives, and fluid camera movements.
One of the many I've seen on AMC on television is
Out of the Past (1947).
A
private eye escapes his past to run a gas station in a small town, but
his past catches up with him. Now he must return to the big city world
of danger, corruption, double crosses and duplicitous dames.
But it could have been one of many. Film Noir present a pretty bleak view of our world. Consider this pitch description of
Blackout:
A
down-and-out American visits London and meets a beautiful blonde who
offers him a fortune to marry her. He quickly agrees but the next day he
awakens in an artist's studio covered with blood and his supposed
father-in-law's corpse!
Sometimes writers put a funny spin on the foibles of the characters, one such 1955 film is "The
Trouble with Harry." Poor Harry gets dug up numerous times during the story. I remember when I saw a 1989 movie
Weekend at Bernie's considered a dark comedy. I was so surprised at myself for laughing hysterically at it.
Many times in life, the story behind the story is intriguing and goes to the dark side. For instance, the movie
Captain Phillips (2013)
The
true story of Captain Richard Phillips and the 2009 hijacking by Somali
pirates of the US-flagged MV Maersk Alabama, the first American cargo
ship hijacked in two hundred years.
Some of the men in
the crew with Captain Phillips contend that Captain Phillips shouldn't
have taken them there in the first place and have claimed a
lawsuit against the real Captain Phillips. Now that would make another good movie.
Reverse
the usual for your characters. What if everyone in your story except
one person was evil...not just one flaw, they had all flaws except for
one good redeeming trait. See what kind of story you get.
For
instance, there's a robbery in town. Everyone helps the robber get away.
Why? It's sad to think about, but what if the world was that way. What
if your character has people believing the best about him and they
couldn't believe he did it. He had charisma personified. But one
character could see through all the songs and dances and convict the
robber.
When you write a story, you get to create a world that
might be hard to imagine...a sad, tragic, magic, or joyful world. But
it's your story with your main character with many flaws, three flaws,
or only one flaw. A flaw is what gets him into trouble. A flaw is what
gets him into the deeper depths of despair. Only when your character is
brave and wise enough to see things differently is he able to think of a
way out of his bottomless pit. You have a choice of a happy ending or
an ending that you drape in the perils of tragedy.
I thought by
looking at these 12 causes of mistakes and glancing at the dark side
might help you decide which flaw is "perfect" for a character in your
story to make him memorable.
Here are a few first sentence story-starters or character sketches:
- Everyone in his family for generations has been trustworthy. But not, Ned Parker.
- A
leader needs good communication, but the President of the United States
did not have good communication on the day when the people of Zamboo
declared war.
- Everyone cringed to think that the airplane built
by Forever Airlines had not had the suggested maintenance inspections
and repairs. Whose fault was it that maintenance orders were not carried
out? Who is going to pay for the deaths caused when Flight 513 went
down on I-95?
- James couldn't focus on his job as a taxi driver.
He worried about his grandfather. He worried about his son in school.
Most of all, he worried about his bank account. He didn't notice the
lady walking out from two parked cars.
- Teresa was unaware of the
faulty electrical cord she used to turn on her hair dryer. She never
checked her surroundings. She took it for granted that everything was
going to be fine and that electrical outlets stay good for a lifetime. The day her hair frizzed and the shock went through her body, was the
day she became paranoid about safety.
Please leave a comment. Tell me some of your techniques for helping your characters fall deeper in trouble or rise from a b-a-a-a-a-d situation to create a better world for themselves. I'd love to hear what you think.
Celebrate you and your gift of writing,
Never Give Up
Joan Y. Edwards
I hope you'll buy Flip Flap Floodle to read to your children and grandchildren because even mean ole Mr. Fox can't stop this little duck from playing his song.
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